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Work Is Being Done On The Street Where You Live

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Dear Sir, MadamI am writing this letter to file a complaint about the road maintenance processing in our locality. I am Mrs. Daohh resident in the ABC building directly beside the work in process. I would like to express my dissatisfaction about the work because it is extended into last night causing sleeping disorders for all residents in the neighborhood. Moreover there are students who are trying to study for their exams. I entitled to increase the number of workers to finish all the work faster and also define the work while we are in our offices and students in their schools. Your prompt action will be highly appreciated. Faithfully yours, Mr. daohhh.
Dear Sir,
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MadamI
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writing this letter to file a complaint about the road maintenance processing in our locality. I am Mrs.
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Daohh
resident in the ABC building
directly
beside the
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work
in process. I would like to express my dissatisfaction about the
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work
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because
it
is extended
into last night causing sleeping disorders for all residents in the neighborhood.
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Moreover
there are students who are trying to study for their exams. I entitled to increase the number of workers to finish all the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
faster and
also
define the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
while we are in our offices and students in their schools.

Your prompt action will be
highly
appreciated.
Faithfully
yours, Mr.
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daohhh
.
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IELTS letter Work Is Being Done On The Street Where You Live

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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