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you have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide

you have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide 7rjyk

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jen, I am a college student and I've graduated for a month and now I am having a long rest near three months. Due to that, I decide to apply to your job to try myself at tourist job. Besides if I can do this job, it will be earned extra money for my life. I have worked at the restaurant for two years when I was in the college and I just founded that I am interested in talking with everyone and going to some destinations to explore more about our world. Also, I am keen on local historic spots and beautiful destinations. So I think my skill can appropriate for this job. At the university, I always got high grades for my projects and most of my projects were attracted audience. As I do not have any phobia of performance I always wanted to get high mark. That’s why for me it will not be hard to cope with this job. I'm looking forward for your mail. Yours faithfully, Jen.

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Jen, I am a college student and I've graduated for a month and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am having a long rest near three months. Due to that, I decide to apply to your job to try myself at tourist job.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Besides,
Besides
 if I can do this job, it will be earned
 extra money for my life.

I have worked at the restaurant for two years when I was in the college and I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 founded that I am interested
 in talking with everyone and going to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 destinations to explore more about our world. Also
, I am keen on local historic spots and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 destinations. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 can appropriate for this job.

At the university, I always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 high grades for my projects and most of my projects were attracted
 audience. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I do not have any phobia of performance I always wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 high mark. That’s why for me it will not be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to cope with this job.

I'm looking forward for your mail.

Yours faithfully
,

Jen. 