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I will not be able to join the office on the given date

I will not be able to join the office on the given date Q8169

Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well in this pandemic. I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to join the office on the given date. In my current organisation, they have just identified the suitable candidate for my profile and the handover process has just began. The process will take approximately 1 month but will try to finish it within 15-20 days. Due to pandemic, the offices are closed so the handover process will be online. The major issue will be the internet connectivity because the candidate identified for my profile is in his native place and recently he was tested Covid positive and now he is in his recovery mode. This might lead to some delay in the handover process. As per the appointment letter my joining date is Monday, 12th July, 2021. I would like to request you to extend my joining date and make it Monday, 2nd August, 2021. Meanwhile I will complete all my procedures in the current organisation. I will be grateful if you consider my above request and it will help me to windup everything in current organisation peacefully. Yours sincerely, Kiran More

Dear Sir,

I hope you are doing well in this pandemic. I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the office on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 date.

In my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
, they have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 identified the suitable candidate for my profile and the handover process has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Use the past participle "begun" after the modal (auxiliary) verb 'has'.begun
began
. The process will take approximately 1 month This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 will try to finish it within 15-20 days. Due to pandemic, the offices are closed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the handover process will be online. The major issue will be the internet connectivity This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the candidate identified for my profile is in his native place and recently he was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluated
tested
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
Covid
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 he is in his recovery mode. This might lead to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 delay in the handover process.

As per the appointment letter my joining date is Monday, 12th When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "July 2021".July 2021
July, 2021
. I would like to request you to extend my joining date and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it Monday, 2nd When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "August 2021".August 2021
August, 2021
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Meanwhile,
Meanwhile
 I will complete all my procedures in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
.

I will be grateful if you consider my above request and it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to windup everything in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
peacefully
.

Yours sincerely
,

Kiran More