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Some of your friends are planning to visit your country near where you live. Write a letter and give them some useful information about the countryside, the weather they will probably have, and some advice on what to pack

Some of your friends are planning to visit your country near where you live. Write a letter and give them some useful information about the countryside, the weather they will probably have, and some advice on what to pack Q81O1

Dear Alice, Thanks a lot for your letter – it was great to hear from you again and we’re delighted that you are planning to visit my country. I know you like travel when the weather is moderate, so I suggest you should come in next April and I promise you never experience hot weather. I just recommend you to bring some warm cloth because in spring we expected the weather will be raining. I hope when you come, you stay with my but I can book a hotel as you want.

Dear Alice, Thanks a lot for your letter Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 it was great to hear from you Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).again, and
again and
 we’re delighted that you are planning to visit my country. I know you like travel when the weather is moderate, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I suggest you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 in next
 April and I promise you never experience hot weather. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 recommend you to bring This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 warm cloth This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 in spring we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 the weather will be raining. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope when you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
, you stay with my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I can book a hotel as you want. 

IELTS letter Some of your friends are planning to visit your country near where you live. Write a letter and give them some useful information about the countryside, the weather they will probably have, and some advice on what to pack

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

92 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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