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you borrowed something from your friend and got it damaged

you borrowed something from your friend and got it damaged k53PM

Dear apexa, I am writing this letter to you with a heavy heart because the laptop which i borrowed from you is incidently damaged by me on last sunday, and i want appology from you. Firstly i want to thank you for your support. My laptop was stolen at the time of exam and without your laptop i was not able to attend exam. So what happened is, on last friady i finished my test. On sunday, i was coming to your house to return your thing back, but as soon as i cross the road, a car is hitted me and it damaged laptop screen. I know this laptop is very precious for you as it is gifted by your father on your eighteen birthday. But trust me i felt very bad when this incident happened. So, now i given your laptop screen to repair in nearest apple store and hopefully it will come back in 5 working days. As soon as i will get it back, i directly come to you. Once again i am really sorry for your loss. Next time i will be more carefull with borrowed things. yours faithfully, Avani Patel

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