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you have left college from another country without any intimation, send a letter and thanks to them

you have left college from another country without any intimation, send a letter and thanks to them 6djqx
Dear Sir, My name is Amanpreet and I was a student at your college in B tech. This letter is being written to express my grave attitude for your attention you given to me. Therefore, the purpose behind leaving the university was that my father expired in the last semester. At that time, I was completed alone and far from my family and relatives. Additionally, when I consult the doctor, he said that is it symptoms of depression, then my mother forced me to come back and continue the rest study in the native land. In particular, your services amused me and feel me like home. The residential building has all amenities and facilites. There was no any room for mistakes. Here, i would like to thankyou again for your presense and beneficial attitude towards students. I have learned a lot related to my studies that would assist me to cop with other subjects. Thanks,
Dear Sir,

My name is
Amanpreet and
I was a student at your college in B tech. This letter is
being written
to express my grave attitude for your attention you
given
to me.

Therefore
, the purpose behind leaving the university was that my father expired in the last semester. At that time, I
was completed
alone and far from my family and relatives.

Additionally
, when I consult the doctor, he said
that is
it symptoms of depression, then my mother forced me to
come
back and continue the rest study in the native land.

In particular
, your services amused me and feel me like home. The residential building has all amenities and
facilites
. There was
no
any room for mistakes. Here,
i
would like to
thankyou
again for your
presense
and beneficial attitude towards students. I have learned a lot related to my studies that would assist me to cop with other subjects.

Thanks,
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IELTS letter you have left college from another country without any intimation, send a letter and thanks to them

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  American English
6 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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