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Write at least 150 words. You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in the head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your latter - explain why you want to work in company head office for six month and say how your work could be done while you are away and ask for his/her help in arranging it.

Purpose of this letter is that i want to work six month in the head office in USA. Currently i am working in Sydney office from past several years. In addition i was awarded best employ last year. I want to improve my skill and knowledge and it can be done if i spend few month in the head office. It will give me oppunity to know more regarding work environment and culture and explore the culture. Firstly when i came back to sydney office. I will try to immplement new techniques which i head learnt in head office. My work back in office will be not effected as i will be doing my work online and some of my co workers will help in that. I will be very greatful if you consider my application and help me in transfering my employment for six months.

Purpose of this letter is that Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 six Possible agreement error. The noun ‘month’ seems to be countable, so consider using: “months”.months
month
 in the head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
A determiner is probably missing here: “in the USA”.in the USA
in USA
.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Currently,
Currently
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am working in Sydney You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 from past several years. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?addition,
addition
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
was awarded
 best employ last year. I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 and Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).knowledge, and
knowledge and
 it can be done
 if Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 spend Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: “few months”.few months
few month
 in the head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
. It will give me Possible spelling mistake found.opp unity
oppunity
 to know more regarding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 environment and culture and explore the culture.

Firstly
 when Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 came back to Possible spelling mistake found.SydneySidneySednaSundaykidneySyria
sydney
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
. I will try to Possible spelling mistake found.implement
immplement
 new techniques which Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 head Possible spelling mistake. ‘learnt’ is British English.learned
learnt
 in head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 back in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 will be not effected as Did you mean “I”?I
i
 will be doing my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 online and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of my This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.co-workerscoworkers
co workers
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in that. I will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Possible spelling mistake found.gratefuldreadfulrestfulfretfulRESTful
greatful
 if you consider my application and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in Possible spelling mistake found.transferring
transfering
 my employment for six months. 