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Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, This well-considered letter is for your attention to appreciate the individual who has assisted the community. To begin with the deserving person, I would like to suggest one name from our society Dr. Sharma. He is MBBA qualified and working in Care hospital from last 8 years. Dr Sharma is consistently helping people without any greed. He has been organizing free medical camps in the society park every last weekend of the month. This campus mainly include tests like eye-sight, Blood-pressure and sugar level. Despite his busy schedule, he also organizes yoga classes every Sunday morning and creates awareness on health related issues. I guess it would be amazing if we can gift him a dinner voucher Luckys restaurant, so that he can spend few hours with his beloved wife and daughter Kaya. Additionally, we can also provide him certification of appreciation for helping people out. I hope you will consider him. Yours Sincerely, Manpreet
Dear Sir,

This well-considered letter is for your attention to appreciate the individual who has assisted the community.

To
begin
with the deserving person, I would like to suggest one name from our society Dr. Sharma. He is
MBBA
qualified and working in Care hospital from last 8 years.

Dr Sharma is
consistently
helping
people
without any greed. He has been organizing free medical camps in the society park every last weekend of the month. This campus
mainly
include
tests
like eye-sight, Blood-pressure and sugar level. Despite his busy schedule, he
also
organizes yoga classes every Sunday morning and creates awareness on health related issues.

I guess it would be amazing if we can gift him a dinner voucher
Luckys
restaurant,
so
that he can spend few hours with his beloved wife and daughter Kaya.
Additionally
, we can
also
provide him certification of appreciation for helping
people
out.

I hope you will consider him.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Manpreet
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IELTS letter Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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