Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You drive to work, but have recently had a problem parking your car at the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the problem with the parking explain how this is affecting you suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the car parking problem which I am facing right now, due to the under-construction of our company parking lot. Let me explain to you about my situation, as you know from the last couple of weeks, there was construction going on in our parking area because of that I could not use my parking spot anymore. Whenever I park my car at the parking site at the end of the day, I found my car full of dust every day. On top of that, yesterday the constructor supervisor informs me that for the next couple of days I can not park my car at my spot because they are going to do some renovation near my parking zone. Today, I came early to secure a parking space in our nearby free public parking area but how long I have to do this? It is realy difficult for me to find parking space for my car. I would glad if you provide me another temporary parking spot in our organization second parking area which we use for our company businesspeople until the construction done. Waiting for your prompt response, Yours Faithfully, John Smith
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards the
car
parking
problem which I am facing right
now
, due to the under-construction of our
company
parking
lot.

Let
me
explain
to you about my situation, as you know from the last couple of weeks, there was construction going on in our
parking
area
because
of that I could not
use
my
parking
spot anymore. Whenever I park my
car
at the
parking
site at the
end
of the day, I found my
car
full of dust every day.
On top of that
, yesterday the constructor supervisor informs me that for the
next
couple of days I can not park my
car
at my spot
because
they are going to do
some
renovation near my
parking
zone.
Today
, I came early to secure a
parking
space in our nearby free public
parking
area
but
how long I
have to
do this? It is
realy
difficult for me to find
parking
space for my car.

I
would glad
if you provide me another temporary
parking
spot in our organization second
parking
area which we
use
for our
company
businesspeople until the construction done.

Waiting for your prompt response,

Yours
Faithfully
,

John Smith
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You drive to work, but have recently had a problem parking your car at the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the problem with the parking explain how this is affecting you suggest what should be done about the problem

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts