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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher 7e5X

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in letter in regards for the advertisement which I saw in community college letter last week for the post of night classes teacher. The Ad was stated that currently teacher requires in night classes for various courses. I would like to apply for business courses such as financial strategies, Consumer Behavior and Economics. As the night classes more for the adult people I believe that requirements for these courses will be high. However, I can teach those courses from basic to advance level classes. I have my master’s degree in business administration from very reputable university and I was gold medalist in finance. Even after my master’s I did some recognizable certificates in same field with my job. I have working in financial corporate for last two years and now I have great knowledge with good experience as well. I am really look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Muhammad Ahmed

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in letter in regards for the advertisement which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 in community college letter last week for the post of night Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "classes'" or "classis's"?classes'classis's
classes
 teacher. The Ad was stated
 that currently
 teacher requires in night classes for various courses.

I would like to apply for business courses such as financial strategies, Consumer Behavior and Economics. As the night classes more for the adult This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 I believe that requirements for these courses will be high. However
, I can teach those courses from basic to advance level classes.

I have my master’s degree in business administration from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 reputable Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).university, and
university and
 I Please check whether an article is missing: "was a gold" or "was an gold"was a goldwas an gold
was gold
 medalist in finance. “Even after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even after
 my master’s I did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 recognizable certificates in same field with my job. I have working in financial corporate for last two years and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I have great knowledge with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 experience as well
.

I am really
Consider using a past participle here: "looked".looked
look
 forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
,

Muhammad Ahmed