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You have seen a newspeper advertisement about job. You decided to apply for a job in the city museum.Write a letter to the direcror of the museum. Introduce yourself. Explain your skill and what experience you have. Give a reason why you want to work there.

You have seen a newspeper advertisement about job. You decided to apply for a job in the city museum. Write a letter to the direcror of the museum. Introduce yourself. Explain your skill and what experience you have. Give a reason why you want to work there. bbOKQ
Dear, Sir. I am writing to you with the hope of applying for the job in the city museum. My full name is Ismatullaeva Shahnoz Khurmatullaevna. I am 40 years old. I am an English teacher. Let me explain my skills and experience. I can speak English fluently. Besides that, I have a good knowledge on other subjects such as history, botany, biology and some others. I am very sociable too. There are three sides of my applying for the job there. Firstly, I want to earn extra money during my summer holiday. Secondly, I am very eager to talk with others, especially with foreigners. Thirdly, it will be a good practice for me in my own job. I would be appraciated, if you paid attention to my letter and gave me a chance of working in the museum, where you conduct. Yours faithfullySh. Ismatullaeva
Dear, Sir.

I am writing to you with the hope of applying for the job in the city museum.

My full name is
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Ismatullaeva
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Shahnoz
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Khurmatullaevna
. I am 40 years
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. I am an English teacher.

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Let
me
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explain
my
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skills
and experience. I can speak English
fluently
.
Besides
that, I have a
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good
knowledge on other subjects such as history, botany, biology and
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some
others. I am
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very
sociable too.

There are three sides of my applying for the job there.
Firstly
, I want to earn extra money during my summer holiday.
Secondly
, I am
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very
eager to talk with others,
especially
with foreigners.
Thirdly
, it will be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
practice for me in my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
job.

I would be
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appraciated
, if you paid attention to my letter and gave me a chance of working in the museum, where you conduct.

Yours
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faithfullySh
.
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Ismatullaeva
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IELTS letter You have seen a newspeper advertisement about job. You decided to apply for a job in the city museum. Write a letter to the direcror of the museum. Introduce yourself. Explain your skill and what experience you have. Give a reason why you want to work there.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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