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you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months

you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months 6NpYx
Dear Manager, I would like to work company's head office during six months. I need your support related to this situation. If you write reference letter for me, It will make mine way easier. Firstly I want to explain why I decided to work head office. If I work head office, my career is influenced well and I will get a chance to represent our department in head office. Also, this situation may help to our department for announcing our success. In the same time head office offers range of educational opportunity for developing employee features. On the other hand I have a good skill which is required for working head office. I can speak two languages fluently. I completed my master degree six months ago. Furthermore I lived by myself outside the country for a long time. My assistance is already ready for doing my job while ı am working head office. Also, we will contact every time because of the fack that to continue the process. Next month I will have been working for five years in both same departmant and same workplace. for this reason I require new work and colleagu. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, beste
Dear Manager,

I would like to
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company
's head
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office
during six months. I need your support related to this situation. If you write reference letter for me, It will
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make
mine way easier.

Firstly
I want to
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explain
why I decided to
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work
head
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office
. If I
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work
head
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office
, my career
is influenced
well and I will
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get
a chance to represent our department in head
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office
.
Also
, this situation may
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help
to our department for announcing our success. In the same time head
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office
offers range of educational opportunity for developing employee features.
On the other hand
I have a
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good
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skill
which
is required
for working head
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office
. I can speak two languages
fluently
. I completed my master degree six months ago.
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Furthermore
I
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lived
by myself outside the country for a long time. My assistance is already ready for doing my job while ı am working head
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office
.
Also
, we will contact every time
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because
of the
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fack
that to continue the process.
Next
month I will have been working for five years in both same
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departmant
and same workplace.
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for
this reason I require new
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work
and
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colleagu
. I look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

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beste
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IELTS letter you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
203 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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