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Duties Instruction for dogs and other duties.

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Dear Friend, Hope you are doing well and stay safe Thank you for taking the time to look after my pet and house while I am away. I need to give you simple instructions to care for my pet and for other duties. After you wake up please take caution of the utilities such as heater and air condition to be turned on 23 degree for heater and 25 degree for the air condition, and to be turned off while you are away to save some energy while off use. Prepare my dog plate to be cleaned before you put the old food and not to mix them together as my dog is sensitive to mixed food and to dirty plates. Start putting my dog breakfast around 8: 00 am and his dinner around 1: 00 pm and make sure that each food is for its period. If you need any further information regards other duties and pet care please contact me at 6474506189 or you can email me at hassan6heary@gmail. com Looking to hear from you Sincerely,

Dear Friend,

Hope you are doing well and stay safe

Thank you for taking the time to look after my pet and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 while I am away. I need to give you simple instructions to care for my pet and for other duties.

After you wake up This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 take caution of the utilities such as heater and air condition to be turned
 on 23 degree for heater and 25 degree for the air condition, and to be turned
 off while you are away to save This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Did you mean "energies"?energies
energy
 while off This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

Prepare my dog plate to be cleaned
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 you put the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 food and not to mix them together as my dog is sensitive to mixed food and to dirty plates.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
Start
 putting my dog breakfast around 8: 00 am and his dinner around 1: 00 pm and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure that each food is for its period.

If you need any further
 information regards other duties and pet care This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 contact me at 6474506189 or you can email me at hassan6heary@gmail. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com


Looking to hear from you

Sincerely
, 

IELTS letter Duties Instruction for dogs and other duties.

Letter

American English

9 paragraphs

178 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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