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agreeing to house-sit for me

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Dear Carolyn, Thank you for agreeing to house-sit for me. If you need to contact me during my holiday, I’ll be staying at the Imperial Hotel in Bundaberg. If it’s urgent, however, please ring my mobile phone, which I’ll keep with me at all times. I’ve written the numbers on a sticky note which I’ve left on the fridge. My cat needs to be fed twice daily so each morning and evening put a handful of cat biscuits in his dish. You will find these in the kitchen pantry. Also, please check throughout the day to make sure he has fresh water. You can give him a small bowl of milk in the evening. I would like you to water my plants, too. The indoor ones in the lounge only need water once every few days but the plants on the balcony need to be watered daily unless there has been heavy rain. Finally, for security, please clear my mail box every day and keep the outside lights on at night. I look forward to seeing you on my return. Yours, Katie
Dear Carolyn,

Thank you for agreeing to
house
-sit for me. If you
need
to contact me during my holiday, I’ll be staying at the Imperial Hotel in Bundaberg. If it’s urgent,
however
,
please
ring my mobile phone, which I’ll
keep
with me at all times. I’ve written the numbers on a sticky note which I’ve
left
on the fridge.

My cat
needs
to
be fed
twice daily
so
each morning and evening put a handful of cat biscuits in his dish. You will find these in the kitchen pantry.
Also
,
please
check
throughout the day to
make
sure he has fresh water. You can give him a
small
bowl of milk in the evening.

I would like you to water my plants, too. The indoor ones in the lounge
only
need
water once every few days
but
the plants on the balcony
need
to
be watered
daily unless there has been heavy rain.
Finally
, for security,
please
clear
my mail box every day and
keep
the outside lights on at night.

I look forward to seeing you on my return. Yours,

Katie
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IELTS letter agreeing to house-sit for me

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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