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Write a letter of complaint to your apartment management. the letter sould include a) who you are 2) what is your complaint 3) suggest solutions to the problem

Write a letter of complaint to your apartment management. the letter sould include a) who you are 2) what is your complaint 3) suggest solutions to the problem ABQjX
Dear Sir My name is Andrew. I am one of the residents in cloud nine apartments. My family and I have been living in apartment number 711 for the past 3 years. Recently, a group of four bachelors have started residing in apartment number 710. Since these apartments are mostly occupied by families, we don’t entertain late night parties. Over the past few weeks residents of apartment number 710 have been partying till early mornings and this has turned into a nuisance for the rest of the residents. Apart from this, the number of guests visiting the same apartment has been really high which is not appreciable. So, I hereby request you to accept my complaint on behalf of the seventh floor residents and take necessary steps to ensure the current issues are solved. I would personally recommend you to request the management to cancel the lease agreement, as this has been a violation of code of conduct. Yours faithfully Andrew
Dear Sir

My name is Andrew. I am one of the
residents
in cloud nine
apartments
. My family and I have been living in
apartment
number
711 for the past 3 years. Recently, a group of four bachelors have
started
residing in
apartment
number
710.

Since these
apartments
are
mostly
occupied by families, we don’t entertain late night parties. Over the past few weeks
residents
of
apartment
number
710 have been partying till early mornings and this has turned into a nuisance for the rest of the
residents
. Apart from this, the
number
of guests visiting the same
apartment
has been
really
high which is not appreciable.

So
, I hereby request you to accept my complaint on behalf of the seventh floor
residents
and take necessary steps to ensure the
current
issues
are solved
. I would
personally
recommend you to request the management to cancel the lease agreement, as this has been a violation of code of conduct.

Yours
faithfully


Andrew
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IELTS letter Write a letter of complaint to your apartment management. the letter sould include a) who you are 2) what is your complaint 3) suggest solutions to the problem

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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