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Dear David, Thank you for your recent letter. Sorry that I haven't written for so long - I was busy at school. You asked me about my living area. I was born in Moscow which was found in 1147 year by due Dolgorykiy. My city is famous for our writers, architectures, scientists and rulers. To get acquainted with our culture you can visit Bolshoi theatre, Pushkinskiy museum and some of the modern exhibitions. Moscow is a very big city so the best way to travel will be travelling by car. It can also provide some understanding of our architecture. Sorry I have to go. I need to walk my dog. Best wishes, Diana
Dear David,

Thank you for your recent letter. Sorry that I haven't written for
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I was busy at school. You asked me about my living area. I
was born
in Moscow which
was found
in 1147 year by due
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Dolgorykiy
. My city is
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famous
for our writers, architectures, scientists and rulers. To
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get
acquainted with our culture you can visit Bolshoi
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theatre
,
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Pushkinskiy
museum and
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some of the
modern exhibitions. Moscow is a
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very
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big
city
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the best way to travel will be travelling by car. It can
also
provide
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some
understanding of our architecture. Sorry I
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have to
go. I need to walk my dog. Best wishes,
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Diana
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IELTS letter write a letter about touring holiday

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
112 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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