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You have to take day off from work from the manager

You have to take day off from work from the manager x2Pow
Dear Madam/SirI would like to suggest that you should take off from my work. I am worker in your company. I have been working there for many years. I propose that i am going to go visit my hometown in order to celebrate my grandfather's jubilee. I am going to ask permission for a few days. May i have permission to this jubilee. As my home is a long way from to reach there, it takes half a day. They have been waiting me for months to come there. Woulf you have some time to chat abot this invite. Unless i go there, They may be upset me. Considering the outcome of the conyest, i suggest that it be postponed to the next term, preferably in the first a few days. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully.
Dear Madam/
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SirI
would like to suggest that you should take off from my work. I am worker in your
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company
. I have been working there for
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many
years.
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I
propose that
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i
am going to go visit my hometown in order to celebrate my grandfather's jubilee.
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I
am going to ask permission for a few days. May
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i
have permission to this jubilee. As my home is a long way from to reach there, it takes half a day. They have been waiting me for months to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
there.
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Woulf
you have
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some
time to chat
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abot
this invite. Unless
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i
go there, They may
be upset
me. Considering the outcome of the
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conyest
,
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i
suggest that it
be postponed
to the
next
term,
preferably
in the
first
a few days. Thank you for your attention. Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You have to take day off from work from the manager

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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