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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

Dear Sir or Madam, By way of introduction, my name is Islam Khalilov and I am writing to you with regard to vacancy announcement by your esteemed company. I am a solution oriented professional with extensive experience in pre-award as well as post-award contracts and supply chain management. I started my career as a junior specialist and got continuously promoted as a recognition of my good work. I have been working for last 3 years in my current role, where I am responsible for contracts and subcontracts administration of multi-million grassroot infrastructure project. I find my skills and background suitable for said vacancy, because your project is at initiation stage and you need a professional that has experience in all phases of the project. As a person, successfully completed a number of projects from start till finish, I understand and always meet the evolving requirements of the project as well as Key performance Indicators assigned to myself by the management. Looking forward to getting invitation to an interview where I can inform about my experience in more detail. Regards, Islam Khalilov

Dear Sir or Madam,

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