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There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved

Dear Manager, Reception area plays an important role of any company or organization here here i would like to talk about renovation of our reception because we have received many complaints through vistors. Our reception area is small in space and we need to build some space here for visitors. When visitors come here they have to wait because of lack of receptionist I think we need 1 more receptionist for attending the visitors. On the other hand, Sofa set and chairs are too old we need to buy some new Chairs and tables where visitors can sit if they want. Some visitors complaints for that reception desk is not clean properly so it is our responsibility to recruit a member who always clean the reception desk. I personally feel that we need immediate requirement to improve the reception area. I hope these queries will be solve fastly.
Dear Manager,

Reception area plays an
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role of any
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company
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i
would like to talk about renovation of our
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reception
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because
we have received
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many
complaints through
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vistors
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Our
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reception
area is
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small
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we
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need
to build
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some
space here for
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visitors
. When
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visitors
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come
here they
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have to
wait
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we
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need
1 more receptionist for attending the visitors.

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, Sofa set and chairs are too
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old
we
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need
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some
new Chairs and tables where
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visitors
can sit if they want.
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Some
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visitors
complaints for that
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reception
desk is not clean
properly
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so
it is our responsibility to recruit a member who always clean the
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reception
desk. I
personally
feel that we
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need
immediate requirement to
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improve
the
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reception
area.

I hope these queries will be
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fastly
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IELTS letter There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved

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  American English
5 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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