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You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company.

You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. LDaV

Dear Sir/Ma’am I Shubham Kulkarni is a final year student of Sales and Marketing at CWI institute. I have also studied a diploma in Business Management at Niagara College. I have recently moved from Pune to Mumbai in search of a better opportunity in a similar field of work. I came across this advertisement which was published in the ‘Times today’ about the job vacancy at the Home depot. About my professional experience. I have worked as a sales associate during my initial college years at Walmart. Where I was trained for Inventory management. My job consisted of daily inventory management and later I was given the full responsibility of the home décor section. Where I was trained in the sales aspect of the business. In the year 2018, I got the opportunity to work as a sales executive at Sobeys. This gave me the opportunity to get hands-on experience in the Food and commodities business. Also, in the same year, I made a noticeable increase in sales which led me to be the employee of the year. Hiring me for the position of store supervisor will be a valuable addition to your sales team. My experiences and your training will enable me to meet your expectations. Also, the same will help me to increase the sales numbers of the store and expand our business in the new areas of the region. You can reach me at 9876393022 to talk further about the job vacancy. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Shubham Kulkarni

Dear Sir/Ma’am

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Sales
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 institute. I have also
 studied a diploma in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
Business
 Management at Niagara College. I have recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from Pune to Mumbai in search of a better opportunity in a similar field of work. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 came across this advertisement which was published
 in the ‘Times This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
’ about the job vacancy at the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Home Depot
Home depot
.

About my professional experience. I have worked as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 associate during my initial college years at Walmart. Where I was trained
 for Inventory management. My job consisted of daily inventory management and later I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 the full responsibility of the home Possible spelling mistake found.decordecoydecors
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 section. “Where” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Where
 I was trained
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 aspect of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
. In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2018, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 the opportunity to work as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 executive at Possible spelling mistake found.ObeysSodasSofasSobersS obeysSo beys
Sobeys
. This gave me the opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 hands-on experience in the Food and commodities You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
. Also
, in the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
, I made a noticeable increase in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 which led me to be the employee of the year.

Hiring me for the position of store supervisor will be a valuable addition to your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 team. My experiences and your training will enable me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 your expectations. Also
, the same will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to increase the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasetransactiondealbusinessauctionmarketing
sales
 numbers of the store and expand our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 in the new areas of the region.

You can reach me at 9876393022 to talk further
 about the job vacancy. Looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours Sincerely
,

Shubham Possible spelling mistake found.FulaniSukarnoBulgariKlarna
Kulkarni