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One of your colleagues was in charge of organising an annual executive conference, and he/she has been successful in doing it. You want to congratulate your college for that. Write a letter to this colleague. In your letter, congratulate your colleague for successfully organising the event mention what you liked about it the most say how much you would like him/her to organise other events as well

One of your colleagues was in charge of organising an annual executive conference, and he/she has been successful in doing it. You want to congratulate your college for that. Write a letter to this colleague. In your letter, congratulate your colleague for successfully organising the event mention what you liked about it the most say how much you would like him/her to organise other events as well PDap
Dear Mrs. Cruz, I am one of the staff in the Marketing Department. I am writing this letter to congratulate you for the successful event that you organized last night. People on the occasion was extremely happy and satisfied. What I liked the most was the theme of the party. It was simple but elegant. Arrangement of chairs and tables are highly in class, the food was appetizing. The host's that you hired are really professionals. Employees are participating attentively on the activities that you prepared. Also, the CEO of our company was amazed on what you did. It was a memorable night for all of us. Even though, you had only two weeks to prepare you did an amazing job. You have the abilities and skills to organize an occasion. I would be happy to see one of your events in the future.
Dear Mrs. Cruz, I am one of the staff in the Marketing Department. I am writing this letter to congratulate you for the successful
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event
that you organized last night.
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People
on the occasion was
extremely
happy and satisfied.

What I liked the most was the theme of the party. It was simple
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but
elegant. Arrangement of chairs and tables are
highly
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
, the food was appetizing. The host's that you hired are
really
professionals. Employees are participating
attentively
on the activities that you prepared.
Also
, the CEO of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
was amazed
on what you did. It was a memorable night for all of us.
Even though
, you had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
two weeks to prepare you did an amazing job.

You have the abilities and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to organize an occasion. I would be happy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
one of your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
in the future.

IELTS letter One of your colleagues was in charge of organising an annual executive conference, and he/she has been successful in doing it. You want to congratulate your college for that. Write a letter to this colleague. In your letter, congratulate your colleague for successfully organising the event mention what you liked about it the most say how much you would like him/her to organise other events as well

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