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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an english-friend.in your letter 1.explain why you have moved 2.describe the new house 3.invite your friend to come and visit

You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an english-friend. in your letter 1. explain why you have moved 2. describe the new house 3. invite your friend to come and visit xKp1
Dear Sepeideh, I hope you all very good. I'm writing this letter to get some information about our new place which is located in countryside in Canada. To be honest, as you may know, our previouse home so small and our children needed to their own room. Owing to these, we decided to migrate to a spacias building, so, recently, we have moved to a new house which is one of the fantastic building i have ever lived. If i want to explain more, i will say that our new house is sourounded by a garden full of trees and flowers. Actually, children can play in a backyard. In addition, our home has five bedrooms, a living room, a sitting room, a kitchen and a wonderfull balcony which has been equipid by outdoor furniture. We would be so glad if you and your family could visit us there at the next weekend. we can go to a forest nearby our home and have a great time together. Please let us to know your decition. Warm wishes, Saeedeh
Dear
Sepeideh
, I hope you all
very
good
. I'm writing this letter to
get
some
information about our new place which
is located
in countryside in Canada. To be honest, as you may know, our
previouse
home
so
small
and our children needed to their
own
room. Owing to these, we decided to migrate to a
spacias
building,
so
, recently, we have
moved
to a new
house
which is one of the fantastic building
i
have ever
lived
. If
i
want to
explain
more,
i
will say that our new
house
is
sourounded
by a garden full of trees and flowers. Actually, children can play in a backyard.
In addition
, our home has five bedrooms, a living room, a sitting room, a kitchen and a
wonderfull
balcony which has been
equipid
by outdoor furniture. We would be
so
glad if you and your family could visit us there at the
next
weekend.
we
can go to a forest nearby our home and have a great time together.
Please
let
us to know your
decition
. Warm wishes,
Saeedeh
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an english-friend. in your letter 1. explain why you have moved 2. describe the new house 3. invite your friend to come and visit

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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