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Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit

Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit NDGy
Dear Grandmother, I hope this letter finds you well. How've you been? I know, it's been a month since we last met and I am really sorry for that. Please forgive me, Grandma and this won't happen again. As you know, this is my final semester of school and my final exams were around the corner. I was super busy preparing for the same as I need three A's to graduate this year. My exams are almost over, only waiting for the final viva exam which got postponed later next week. So, let's catch up this weekend at your favorite restaurant, the Plaza. I will reserve us seats as you know they get super busy especially on weekends. Write me back what time you will arrive. Later we will go to Botanic garden, I got free passes for whole family which I won in robot wrestling. I have also written to my parents, hopefully they would make it too. Excited to see you Grandma! Love, Ashly
Dear Grandmother,

I hope this letter finds you well. How've you
been
? I know, it's been a month since we last
met and
I am
really
sorry for that.
Please
forgive me, Grandma and this won't happen again.

As you know, this is my final semester of school and my final exams were around the corner. I was super busy preparing for the same as I need three A's to graduate this year. My exams are almost over,
only
waiting for the final viva exam which
got
postponed later
next
week.

So
,
let
's catch up this weekend at your favorite restaurant, the Plaza. I will reserve us seats as you know they
get
super busy
especially
on weekends. Write me back what time you will arrive. Later we will go to Botanic garden, I
got
free passes for whole family which I won in robot wrestling.

I have
also
written to my parents,
hopefully
they would
make
it too.

Excited to
see
you Grandma!

Love
,

Ashly
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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