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You have seen a course at a local college and you are interested in knowing more details about the course.

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jacob Paul and I am interested in the Programming for Beginners course that your college is offering at the moment. I have been looking for some motivation to start my career in the IT industry and I believe that this course is a great entry point for people like myself, especially because it is designed for absolute beginners, as I understand. I would like you to provide me with more details about this course, such as the start date, any possible prerequisites or requirements, and, maybe, the textbook that is going to be used throughout the course. I’m especially interested in the material that is going to be covered and the programming languages to be used. I would really appreciate if you share some more information on this course. Any online resources, such as the course outline, for instance, will also work perfectly fine. Thank you in advance and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! With regards, Jacob P
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Jacob
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Paul and
I
am interested
in the Programming for Beginners
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course
that your college is offering at the moment.

I have been looking for
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some
motivation to
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start
my career in the IT industry and I believe that this
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course
is a great entry point for
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people
like myself,
especially
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because
it
is designed
for absolute beginners, as I understand.

I would like you to provide me with more
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details
about this
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course
, such as the
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start
date, any possible prerequisites or requirements, and, maybe, the textbook
that is
going to be
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used
throughout the
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course
.
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I
’m
especially
interested in the material
that is
going to
be covered
and the programming languages to be
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used
.

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I
would
really
appreciate if you share
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some
more information on this
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course
. Any online resources, such as the
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course
outline,
for instance
, will
also
work
perfectly
fine.

Thank you in
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advance and
I am looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
!

With regards,

Jacob P
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IELTS letter You have seen a course at a local college and you are interested in knowing more details about the course.

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