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You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late and you faced many problems write a letter to the owner of the company - Where were you going - what problems did you face - what action would you like the owner to take

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Respected sir, I am writing this letter to dissatisfy the punctuality of train time. it is a solemn problem with everyone. I traveled from Vadodara to Mumbai in Last Week. Let me elebrote more details. I bought a train ticket from Vadodara station at 6 o’clock in the morning. The train was reached on time at the station. But the scheduled time reached my destination time 12 0’clock but the train reached 2 o’clock. I was explaining my situation in front of the management team but they were not convinced and they were selecting another person So I missed my interview for good opportunities in the job as well as a reputable organisation. I am dissatisfied with your train service of punctuality. I am slacking my good opportunity by your service so i want to refund my money for your bed service which i bought a ticket. I would like to take immediate action on this matar and follow the schedule of time. I look forward to your reply in this situation. Your faithfully Hemang Patel
Respected sir,

I am writing this letter to dissatisfy the punctuality of
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train
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time
.
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it
is a solemn problem with everyone. I traveled from Vadodara to Mumbai in Last Week.

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more
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bought
a
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train
ticket from Vadodara station at 6 o’clock in the morning. The
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was reached
on
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at the station.
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the scheduled
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time
reached my destination
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time
12 0’clock
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but
the
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train
reached 2 o’clock. I was explaining my situation in front of the management team
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they were not
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convinced and
they were selecting another person
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So
I missed my interview for
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good
opportunities in the job
as well
as a reputable
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organisation
.

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am dissatisfied
with your
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train
service of punctuality.
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I
am slacking my
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good
opportunity by your service
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so
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want to refund my money for your bed service which
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a ticket.
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would like to take immediate action on this
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matar
and follow the schedule of time.

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look forward to your reply in this situation.

Your
faithfully


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Hemang
Patel

IELTS letter You recently traveled on a train which arrived very late and you faced many problems write a letter to the owner of the company - Where were you going - what problems did you face - what action would you like the owner to take

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  American English
6 paragraphs
175 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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