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letter to the manager for seeking approval for spending six months in head office

letter to the manager for seeking approval for spending six months in head office RN73k
Dear Dr Paul, My letter requests you and seeks your approval and guidance to get the ball rolling for relocating to London, joining our head office for a short span of time nearly six months. Dr Paul, as we know London is a hot spot, bringing a rich collection of the principal scientists at our fist. I am eager to learn the strategy of crunching the numbers and getting down to the business. Utmostly the tact of whipping the cream should be mastered from them without affecting the business. They are also the man who strictly go by the books, without neither cutting the corners nor do they cook the books. I would like to ensure you that my responsibilities will never be affected while I am away as I will always have a birds-eye on accountability. our team leads are potent enough to bring out the best. something to note is the advantage of the difference in the time zone which will also facilitate me in balancing the task on my plate. I request you to support the foot in the door so that I turn out to be a better game planner. I also urge you to help me with arrangements of the above said. Hoping to hear from you soon. Thanking YouRiya
Dear Dr Paul, My letter requests you and seeks your approval and guidance to
get
the ball rolling for relocating to London, joining our head office for a short span of time
nearly
six months. Dr Paul, as we know London is a hot spot, bringing a rich collection of the principal scientists at our fist. I am eager to learn the strategy of crunching the numbers and getting down to the business.
Utmostly
the tact of whipping the cream should
be mastered
from them without affecting the business. They are
also
the
man
who
strictly
go by the books, without neither cutting the corners nor do they cook the books. I would like to ensure you that my responsibilities will never be
affected
while I am away as I will always have a birds-eye on accountability.
our
team leads are potent
enough
to bring out the best.
something
to note is the advantage of the difference in the time zone which will
also
facilitate me in balancing the task on my plate. I request you to support the foot in the door
so
that I turn out to be a better game planner. I
also
urge you to
help
me with arrangements of the above said. Hoping to hear from you
soon
. Thanking
YouRiya
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IELTS letter letter to the manager for seeking approval for spending six months in head office

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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