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I am writing this letter to enquire an assistance in solving this problem occured in your Lila hotel last week.

I am writing this letter to enquire an assistance in solving this problem occured in your Lila hotel last week. 85oql
I am writing this letter to enquire an assistance in solving this problem occured in your Lila hotel last week. We have just spent our time to stay at your hotel in Sydney. We were your hotel guests from March 30 to April 7, during a week. When I arrived home in Kokand with my family I realised that I left my ID card and bag at the hotel. While I was packing my luggage in the morning I saw them standing at the table of our room 5. I think I may have accidentally left them at the table. Firstly, I am glad to stay at your hotel. I really adored it and of course, I would come it again. And now, I would rather you help me find my bag. It is a pink leather bag and has white dots on background. I has two zippers attached to it. Inside my bag I left at your hotel has some vital documents and some personal things such as ID card, really precious watch, espicially, my dairy. My dairy has a sentamental value to me. When I was ten my dad gave it for my birthday. Since that, It has been my close friend. It contains my last periods. Please check with your lost and found deparment about my bag and call me if you find it. I will send you a check to pay for the postage. I look foward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Nazira Boratova
I am writing this letter to
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enquire
an assistance in solving this problem
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occured
in your Lila
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hotel
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last week
.

We have
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just
spent our time to stay at your
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hotel
in Sydney. We were your
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hotel
guests from March 30 to April 7, during a week. When I arrived home in
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Kokand
with my family I
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realised
that I
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left
my ID card and
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bag
at the
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hotel
.
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While
I was packing my luggage in the morning I
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saw
them standing at the table of our room 5. I
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think
I may have
accidentally
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left
them at the table.

Firstly
, I am glad to stay at your
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hotel
. I
really
adored it and
of course
, I would
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come
it again. And
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now
, I would
rather
you
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help
me find my
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bag
. It is a pink leather
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bag
and has white dots on background. I
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has
two zippers attached to it. Inside my
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bag
I
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left
at your
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hotel
has
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some
vital documents and
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some
personal things such as ID card,
really
precious
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watch
,
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espicially
, my dairy.

My dairy has a
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sentamental
value to me. When I was ten my dad gave it for my birthday. Since that, It has been my close friend. It contains my last periods.
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Please
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check
with your lost and found
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deparment
about my
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bag
and call me if you find it. I will
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send
you a
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check
to pay for the postage.

I look
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foward
to hearing from you
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soon
.

Sincerely
,

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Nazira
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Boratova
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IELTS letter I am writing this letter to enquire an assistance in solving this problem occured in your Lila hotel last week.

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7 paragraphs
248 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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