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Dear sir, I am writing this letter to complain about a serious delay created at at the local railway station, which has cost me my new job. Last Saturday(25-02-2021) I went to Brampton by via rail for final stage interview for my job. However, there was a small dispute between the railway staff and the train operators, which resulted in an immediate strike. I was late by four hours when train reached Brampton. I was one of the two candidates selected for the interview. As, I reached late I was told that the other candidate is appointed. I tried to explain the reason behind my late arrival but the managements decision was final. I feel frustrated because a small dispute between employees resulted strike. My career is ruined due to a pathetic reason. I feel that those involved in this matter should be penalized. I will draw attention of the higher railway authorities as well as local newspapers for justice. Yours faithfully, Sukhjeet Singh Hunjan

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about a serious delay created Possible typo: you repeated a wordat
at at
 the local railway station, which has cost me my new job. Last Saturday(25-02-2021) I went to Brampton by via rail for final stage interview for my job. However
, there was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 dispute between the railway staff and the train operators, which resulted in an immediate strike. I was late by four hours when train reached Brampton.

I was one of the two candidates selected for the interview. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
, I reached late I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 that the other candidate is appointed
. I tried to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the reason behind my late arrival This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the managements decision was final.

I feel frustrated This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 dispute between employees resulted strike. My career is ruined
 due to a pathetic reason. I feel that those involved in this matter should be penalized
. I will draw attention of the higher railway authorities as well
 as local newspapers for justice.

Yours faithfully
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