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gym bag lost in gym locker room

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Dear sir, My name is Sukhjeet Hunjan, I am a lifetime member of the gym. i am writing this letter to seek your urgent assistance as yesterday i have forgotten my gym bag in the locker room. my membership number is 112290. I work out regularly on weekdays from 7 am to 8 am. However, My schedule was running late this morning so i forgot to take my bag. It is a black duffel bag with a white strap on it. It contains my personal documents such as driving license and health card. my original locker number is 25 but I used locker number 20 with my personal lock on it as it is allowed for lifetime members to use any locker. Since the gym is going to remain closed for a week due to renovation. I cannot enter the premises. However, I need to get my bag as soon as possible and hence i am requesting you to allow me to enter the gym and take my bag or I can come to the gym and hand over key to one of your employees so they can get my bag for me. I am confident that you will surely cooperate with me in this matter Yours faithfullySukhjeet Hunjan
Dear sir,

My name is
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Sukhjeet
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Hunjan
, I am a lifetime member of the
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am writing this letter to seek your urgent assistance as yesterday
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have forgotten my
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in the locker room.
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my
membership number is 112290. I work out
regularly
on weekdays from 7 am to 8 am.
However
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forgot to take my bag.

It is a black
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with a white strap on it. It contains my personal documents such as driving license and health card.
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my
original locker number is 25
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locker number 20 with my personal lock on it as it is
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for lifetime members to
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any locker.

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is going to remain closed for a week due to renovation. I cannot enter the premises.
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, I need to
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my
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as
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hence
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am requesting you to
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me to enter the
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and take my
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or I can
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to the
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and hand over key to one of your employees
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they can
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my
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for me. I am confident that you will
surely
cooperate with me in this matter

Yours
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faithfullySukhjeet
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Hunjan
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IELTS letter gym bag lost in gym locker room

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4 paragraphs
208 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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