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You have recently visited the workplace of one of your parents

You have recently visited the workplace of one of your parents g858l

Hi Anna, Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you. How are things with you and your family? Hope you are well. To begin with, yesterday i had the opportunity to visit my mother’s workplace and it made a really big impression on me. As you know, my mother works in a local hospital. It’s quite huge but not modernly furnished. In this hospital there are a lot of people with different professions from therapist to surgeon. My mum is a nurse. To be honest, I have never imagine how difficult and responsible this job is. when I was little I thought this job wasn't important. The reason I think so is that you just have to take care of people. today I saw something completely different. a nurse is no easier job than a doctor. you need to come for help in time if the patient feels bad. finally, yesterday I was convinced that the doctor or the nurse is not the profession of my dreams. it requires a lot of knowledge and effort. in addition, you are responsible for the lives of patients. however, I am proud of my mother for choosing this profession. have you ever had a similar experience? I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Best wishes, Sasha

Hi Anna,

Thanks for your letter. It was great to hear from you. How are things with you and your family? Hope you are well.

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Best wishes,

Sasha