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You have bought a mobile phone in a duty free shop just a few days ago and it doesn't work properly. Write a letter to the manager to complain about it and ask him/ her to solve the problem.

You have bought a mobile phone in a duty free shop just a few days ago and it doesn't work properly. Write a letter to the manager to complain about it and ask him/ her to solve the problem. qQVE5
Dear Sir, My Name is Erastus Jones, a regular client in your prestiguous firm. I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction as regards an item of gadgets purchased in your store recently. Last monday dated 18th December 2021, l purchased a techno 5 pop phone from your store and was very excited to receive the order but later discovered that the phone features are not functioning effectively as advertised. I am hoping that it is a manufacturing flaw and that you will replace it. In Relation to the specifics of the phone, it is an android techno 5 pop with great features but the camera is malfuctioning and also there is connectivity problem to the internet and as a result as disrupt my activities including my assignment and project work. As a solution, l will suggest that a similar phone of same features be returned back to my address within the stipulated time frame or a refund be paid immediately to my account with five business working days and if l don't hear back from you within some time, l will be forced to contact paypal or any other higher authority. I am hoping that you will accede to my requests and resolve it promptly. Yours faithfully, Erastus Jonnes.
Dear Sir,

My Name is
Erastus
Jones, a regular client in your
prestiguous
firm. I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction as regards an item of gadgets
purchased
in your store recently.

Last
monday
dated 18th December 2021, l
purchased
a techno 5 pop
phone
from your store and was
very
excited to receive the order
but
later discovered that the
phone
features are not functioning
effectively
as advertised. I am hoping that it is a manufacturing flaw and that you will replace it.

In Relation to the specifics of the
phone
, it is an android techno 5 pop with great features
but
the camera is
malfuctioning
and
also
there is connectivity problem to the internet and
as a result
as disrupt my activities including my assignment and project work.

As a solution, l will suggest that a similar
phone
of same features be
returned back
to my address within the stipulated time frame or a refund
be paid
immediately to my account with five business working days and if l don't hear back from you within
some
time, l will
be forced
to contact
paypal
or any other higher authority.

I am hoping that you will accede to my requests and resolve it
promptly
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Erastus
Jonnes
.
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IELTS letter You have bought a mobile phone in a duty free shop just a few days ago and it doesn't work properly. Write a letter to the manager to complain about it and ask him/ her to solve the problem.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
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