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Dear Sir SmithI've seen your advertisement for tour guide job and want to apply for this position. I've just finished second semester of university and I'm looking for a part time job now. I'm good at searching interesting facts so that means I've known to much facts about our city. I also used to be a nature tour guide when I was 20. I've read about different type of personality type and I can get along with variety of characters very well. I'm also tall. this might be funny in the first sight but is really important for a tour guide. Because when you want to talk to a group all of them muse see you. Now I gust you understand I'm funny too. I hope you will consider me for this position. Thank you
Dear Sir
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your advertisement for tour guide job and want to apply for this position. I've
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finished second semester of university and I'm looking for a
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part time
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at searching interesting facts
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that means I've known
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much
facts about our city.
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I
also
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to be a nature tour guide when I was 20.
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've read about
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type of personality type and I can
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along with variety of characters
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well.
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for a tour guide.
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when you want to talk to a group all of them muse
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you.
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I gust you understand I'm
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funny
too. I hope you will consider me for this position. Thank
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IELTS letter Apply for local tour guide position

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  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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