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Apply for local tour guide position

Apply for local tour guide position 3gaww

Dear Sir SmithI've seen your advertisement for tour guide job and want to apply for this position. I've just finished second semester of university and I'm looking for a part time job now. I'm good at searching interesting facts so that means I've known to much facts about our city. I also used to be a nature tour guide when I was 20. I've read about different type of personality type and I can get along with variety of characters very well. I'm also tall. this might be funny in the first sight but is really important for a tour guide. Because when you want to talk to a group all of them muse see you. Now I gust you understand I'm funny too. I hope you will consider me for this position. Thank you

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