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A complain letter to your bank manager.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you a letter that you can assist to me with an issue regarding a bank card that I recently procured from your Bank Office. On 20 June, I purchased a XPR phone from the Nike store in Turkey. The phone cost 1500 Turkish lira and I paid it with my visa credit card. When I arrived home, I checked my bank account then I realized that 2000 Turkish lira were withdrawn instead of 1500 Turkish lira from my account. I called the shopping store and they sent me the sales slip. And the amount of money which was withdrawn from my account was 1500 Turkish lira. But according to my account history after that payment, 500 Turkish Lira extra money was withdrawn from my account which was not within my knowledge. Would you kindly deposit my lost money back. I attached a copy of the receipt with this letter for your information. Looking forward to hear from you very soon. Yours faithfully, Mehmet Ali Akbuz

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you a letter that you can assist to me with an issue regarding a bank card that I recently procured from your Bank Office.

On 20 June, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a Possible spelling mistake found.PRCPRNPRAprIPRMPR
XPR
 phone from the Nike store in Turkey. The phone cost 1500 Turkish Possible agreement error. The noun 'lira' seems to be countable, so consider using: "liras", "lire".liraslire
lira
 and I paid it with my visa credit card.

When I arrived home, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 my bank You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoryexplanationdetailtaleversionnarrative
account
 then I realized that 2000 Turkish lira were withdrawn instead
 of 1500 Turkish lira from my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoryexplanationdetailtaleversionnarrative
account
. I called the shopping Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).store, and
store and
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 me the sales slip. And the amount of money which was withdrawn from my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoryexplanationdetailtaleversionnarrative
account
 was 1500 Turkish Possible agreement error. The noun 'lira' seems to be countable, so consider using: "liras", "lire".liraslire
lira
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 according to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoryexplanationdetailtaleversionnarrative
account
 history after that payment, 500 Turkish Lira extra money was withdrawn from my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoryexplanationdetailtaleversionnarrative
account
 which was not within my knowledge.

Would you kindly deposit my lost money back. I attached a copy of the receipt with this letter for your information.

Looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Mehmet Ali Possible spelling mistake found.AlbumAkbarAbutAbuzzABUABZ
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