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You have recently started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: • Explain the reasons why you changed jobs • Describe your new job • Tell him/her your other news

You have recently started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: • Explain the reasons why you changed jobs • Describe your new job • Tell him/her your other news x7xg
Dear Pooja, I hope you are doing good. It’s been long we have connected with each other. Last time we meet during your birthday at your place. I have enjoyed my stay at your home, and you showed me all the beautiful places in your city. I’m writing this letter to let you know that I have recently changed my job, and I have now moved to my hometown. Because of my father frequent illness, I had to make this decision. Moreover, there is no one at my home to take care of him and he is been keeping unwell for a quite long time. I’ll like to talk about my new position at JP Morgan. It’s one of the top 5 MNC companies and I have been hired at Sales Department Head role. It is a challenging position as I have to look after all the branches in my city of my project. In addition, they have offered a high paying salary along with other benefits. Furthermore, I’ve decided to settle down in personal life and will marry Raj in upcoming month. The wedding will be held on 25th April at my place. I would like you to join and also bring along your partner. Hope to see you soon. All the best, Rashmi
Dear
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Pooja
,

I hope you are doing
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good
. It’s been long we have connected with each other. Last time we
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meet
during your birthday at your place. I have enjoyed my stay at your home, and you
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showed
me all the
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beautiful
places in your city.

I’m writing this letter to
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let
you know that I have recently
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changed
my job, and I have
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now
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moved
to my hometown.
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Because
of my father frequent illness, I had to
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make
this decision.
Moreover
, there is no one at my home to take care of
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him and
he
is been
keeping unwell for a quite long time.

I’ll like to talk about my new position at JP Morgan. It’s one of the top 5
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MNC
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companies
and I have
been hired
at Sales Department Head role. It is a challenging position as I
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have to
look
after all
the branches in my city of my project.
In addition
, they have offered a high paying salary along with other benefits.

Furthermore
, I’ve decided to settle down in personal life and will marry Raj in upcoming month. The wedding will
be held
on 25th April at my place. I would like you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
and
also
bring along your partner.

Hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

All the best,

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Rashmi
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IELTS letter You have recently started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: • Explain the reasons why you changed jobs • Describe your new job • Tell him/her your other news

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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