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you have recently started work in a new company. write a letter to your English speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you changed jobs. Describe your new job. Tell her your other news

Dear sandy I'm writing this letter to tell you that I changed my job. As you know me I love to experience new things in my life. My last job was good but still I started felt boar on that job. Now I am working as a English teacher in a school. I can't explain my feelings to you that how much I like to spend time with kids. They always make me happy and I enjoyed this profession much more. I have one another good news for you that I am getting married next month. so letting you know that without any excuse you should be there before one week. so talk to your boss for vacation. Keep in touch Sandeep
Dear sandy

I'm writing this letter to
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tell
you that I
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changed
my job.
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As
you know me I
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love
to experience new things in my life. My last job was
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good
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but
still
I
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started
felt boar on that job.

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Now
I am working as
Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
a
English teacher in a school. I can't
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explain
my feelings to you that how much I like to spend time with kids. They always
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make
me
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
happy and
I enjoyed this profession much more.

I have one another
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good
news for you that I am getting married
next
month.
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so
letting you know that without any excuse you should be there
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before
one week.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
so
talk to your boss for vacation.

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Keep
in touch

Sandeep

IELTS letter you have recently started work in a new company. write a letter to your English speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you changed jobs. Describe your new job. Tell her your other news

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
121 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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