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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

Dear john, Sorry I haven't written for ages, I have been so busy over the last year, and i never seem to have a minute to myself. It was great to get your email and iam thrilled to accept your invitation to visit your country. Before i leave Morocco, I thought it will be nice to bring something as a gift to your daughter, i know that most of girls like to play with dolls especially the BARBY doll, but I'm not sure if she really like this kind of gift. So could you please advise me about a gift that she will like! I have never been to spain before, and i don't know how the weather looks like in this season, i thought you might help me to chose the right and the suitable clouths so that we can enjoy all the activities. I also would to know more about food, you may know that i'm a big eater and i like to discover new tastes but as you know iam muslim, iam wandering if they provide HALAL food in spain. Well, let me finish here, iam eagerly waiting for your reply to this letter, please pass my best wishes to your beloved family. Best regards, William smith

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