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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

Dear Sir/Madam, This is to bring to your kind attention that I Tara a resident of Agarasen Colony for the last 10 years would like to inform you that a park adjacent to your colony is proposed to sell by the local council without having the consent of local people. The park is very essential for us in day to day living as it is the only park in our area. Most of the children went there to play and at the same time, the older generation people would go there for jogging, yoga, meditation etc. Indirectly it result in physical development of our encircle colony people. However, we are planning to go to media and other social network channels to raise our plea. We also request your media house to publish this news in the forefront so that the Local council will drop their plan to sell the park. As it is a noble cause, please consider our request as well as publish the news in your newspaper to stop them to sell this park. Yours Sincerely, Tara Sharma
Dear Sir/Madam,

This is to bring to your kind attention that I Tara a resident of
Agarasen
Colony for the last 10 years would like to inform you that a park adjacent to your colony
is proposed
to sell by the local council without having the consent of local
people
.

The park is
very
essential for us in day to day living as it is the
only
park in our area. Most of the children went there to play and at the same time, the older generation
people
would go there for jogging, yoga, meditation etc.
Indirectly
it
result
in physical development of our encircle colony
people
.

However
, we are planning to go to media and other social network channels to raise our plea. We
also
request your media
house
to publish this news in the forefront
so
that the Local council will drop their plan to sell the park.

As it is a noble cause,
please
consider our request
as well
as publish the news in your newspaper to
stop
them to sell this park.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Tara Sharma
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IELTS letter There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

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  American English
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6.0
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