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You have recently started a new job. Write a letter to your friend to tell her about it and invite for an evening meal. - Describe how you feel about the job. - Give directions to a meeting place. - Give suggestions on where to stay, if she is coming from a different city

You have recently started a new job. Write a letter to your friend to tell her about it and invite for an evening meal. - Describe how you feel about the job. - Give directions to a meeting place. - Give suggestions on where to stay, if she is coming from a different city e5wGA
Dear Sam, Hope you are good! I am delighted to inform you that I have got my dream job. As you know, I have been trying to get through this interview since last year, finally I have made it. My office will start next month and since I will be new to work, I would not be able to take leaves in initial months. So I was planning to meet you before I join. How about catching up this weekend? Remember, I was telling you about the new Italian restaurant which serves relishing food. We can have lunch there. It is just half a kilometre from my house. Thereafter, you can come and stay overnight with me at my home. Call me and let me know if any amendments to be made. Hope to seeing you soon. Warm wishes, Shreta
Dear Sam,

Hope you are
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good
! I
am delighted
to inform you that I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
my dream job. As you know, I have been trying to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
through this interview since last year,
finally
I have made it.

My office will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
next
month and since I will be new to work, I would not be able to take
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
in initial months.
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So
I was planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you
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before
I
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join
.

How about catching up this weekend? Remember, I was telling you about the new Italian restaurant which serves relishing food. We can have lunch there. It is
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just
half a
Possible spelling mistake. 'kilometre' is British English.
kilometre
from my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
. Thereafter, you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and stay overnight with me at my home.

Call me and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if any amendments to
be made
. Hope to seeing you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Warm wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Shreta

IELTS letter You have recently started a new job. Write a letter to your friend to tell her about it and invite for an evening meal. - Describe how you feel about the job. - Give directions to a meeting place. - Give suggestions on where to stay, if she is coming from a different city

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  American English
7 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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