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Request for a change in the timings of French Classes.

Request for a change in the timings of French Classes. 7a0n2
Request for a change in the timings of French Classes. Dear Sir, My name is Amanjot Singh and I am enrolled in 9: 30 AM to 10: 30 AM batch of French classes from 14-09-2019.  Sir, I will not be able to attend classes as I am not free till 7 PM during the weekdays and till 4. 30 PM on weekends due to some preoccupied engagements. It is, therefore, requested to kindly change the timings of my batch accordingly. Thank you.
Request for a
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change
in the timings of French Classes.

Dear Sir, My name is
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Amanjot
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Singh and
I
am enrolled
in 9: 30 AM to 10: 30 AM batch of French classes from 14-09-2019.  Sir, I will not be able to attend classes as I am not free till 7 PM during the weekdays and till 4. 30 PM on weekends due to
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some
preoccupied engagements. It is,
therefore
, requested to kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the timings of my batch
accordingly
. Thank you.
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IELTS letter Request for a change in the timings of French Classes.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
82 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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