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A letter to a company which is looking for help to renovate school buildings, and you want to help for it.

A letter to a company which is looking for help to renovate school buildings, and you want to help for it. GM3Xe
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that I'm interested to support your noble casue of renovating school building. I am on a break starting next monday and I will be honoured to join other helping hands starting tuesday next week I'm a civil engineering by profession and I'd love if I can get some work related to my skills and knowledge. I am also good at painting walls & ceilings, if that can be of any help! As you would probably know, I have always been interested in helping children shaping their future and I can't ask for better opportunity that this. Moreover, my father and grandfather have also contributed in the past and i wish to continue this family tradition Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully, Kaushal
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to
let
you know that I'm interested to support your noble
casue
of renovating school building. I am on a break starting
next
monday
and I will be
honoured
to
join
other helping hands starting
tuesday
next
week

I'm a civil engineering by profession and I'd
love
if I can
get
some
work related to my
skills
and knowledge.
I
am
also
good
at painting walls & ceilings, if that can be of any
help
!

As you would
probably
know, I have always
been interested
in helping children shaping their future and I can't
ask for
better opportunity that this.
Moreover
, my father and grandfather have
also
contributed in the past and
i
wish to continue this family tradition

Thank you for your consideration

Yours
faithfully
,

Kaushal
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IELTS letter A letter to a company which is looking for help to renovate school buildings, and you want to help for it.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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