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You found a job opportunity in a foreign country. Write a letter to your friend who knows about the country. In your letter mention the following: - What is the nature of your future job - why did you apply for that job - Ask for details and his advice about the country.

You found a job opportunity in a foreign country. Write a letter to your friend who knows about the country. In your letter mention the following: - What is the nature of your future job - why did you apply for that job - Ask for details and his advice about the country. 7a0oA
Dear Jay, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I'm writing to let you know about the job, which I found in dubai and I want some information about dubai from you. Because of your part-time bussiness in dubai you know things about it. Let me explain my situation, the job which I found is related to the construction and as a civil engineer, this is very good oppurtunity for me. Because I can learn many new skills from it and it is full-time job, so I will get all the benefits pluse bonus pay as well. Would you kindly, think about it deeply and advice me about the rules and regulations. It will be really helpful if you will also give me some information related to the accomodation. Thank you for your consideration. Yours lovingly, RUSHI
Dear Jay,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I'm writing to
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let
you know about the job, which I found in
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dubai
and I want
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some
information about
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dubai
from you.
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Because
of your part-time
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bussiness
in
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dubai
you know things about it.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation, the job which I found
is related
to the construction and as a civil engineer, this is
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very
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good
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oppurtunity
for me.
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Because
I can learn
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many
new
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skills
from it and it is full-time job,
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so
I will
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get
all the benefits
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pluse
bonus pay
as well
.

Would you kindly,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about it
deeply
and advice me about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations. It will be
really
helpful if you will
also
give me
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some
information related to the
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accomodation
.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
lovingly
,

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RUSHI

IELTS letter You found a job opportunity in a foreign country. Write a letter to your friend who knows about the country. In your letter mention the following: - What is the nature of your future job - why did you apply for that job - Ask for details and his advice about the country.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
141 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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