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You have recently returned from an afternoon at your public library, and noticed various negative aspects that could be improved upon. Write a letter to the manager of the public library. In your letter: Describe the poor experience you had Include ideas for what the library should change Explain why you feel the library needs alteration

You have recently returned from an afternoon at your public library, and noticed various negative aspects that could be improved upon. Write a letter to the manager of the public library. In your letter: Describe the poor experience you had Include ideas for what the library should change Explain why you feel the library needs alteration mNrN
To whom it may concern, I m writing this letter regarding my unpleasant experience at the library. As the college is progressing towards finals, I feel like library is the supreme place to study. But to my surprise the the atmosphere is totally opposite of what I thought about. Its extremely loud and crowded during finals as result those who come first they only get the vacant space to reap the benefit of studying there. Other than that it lack internet service and digital library where you can browse digital copies of books and also get hand on some previous years sample exams. In my opinion Our library needs upgradation. Let me explain my situation when ever i went here after my classes to revise I never got any place to fill in, Moreover if love to study in silence but there is no decorum maintain there. Although staff can help me with finding the books but i always got cold response. It lacks a printing section where you can xerox sample mock test. Library has all the infrastructure but it fall behind on crucial amenities which need immediate attention. I think for the starters library should get free internet service, a digital library section and xerox area. other than that the sitting area should be expanded in wasted canteen area as no one use the canteen. All these facilities not only gonna help present students but its very essential or future students. it will immensely improve college reputation on how much they are serious for their students education. thanking for your consideration. Yours faithfullysiddharth bakshi
To whom it may concern,

I m
writing this letter regarding my unpleasant experience at the library.

As the college is progressing towards finals, I feel like library is the supreme place to study.
But
to my surprise
the the
atmosphere is
totally
opposite of what I
thought
about. Its
extremely
loud and crowded during finals as result those who
come
first
they
only
get
the vacant space to reap the benefit of studying there. Other than that it lack internet service and digital library where you can browse digital copies of books and
also
get
hand on
some
previous years sample exams. In my opinion Our library needs
upgradation
.

Let
me
explain
my situation when ever
i
went here after my classes to revise I never
got
any place to fill in,
Moreover
if
love
to study in silence
but
there is no decorum maintain there. Although staff can
help
me with finding the books
but
i
always
got
cold
response. It lacks a printing section where you can xerox sample mock
test
. Library has all the infrastructure
but
it
fall
behind on crucial amenities which need immediate attention.

I
think
for the
starters
library should
get
free internet service, a digital library section and xerox area.
other
than that the sitting area should
be expanded
in wasted canteen area as no one
use
the canteen.

All these facilities not
only
gonna
help
present students
but
its
very
essential or future students.
it
will
immensely
improve
college reputation on how much they are serious for their students education.
thanking
for your consideration.

Yours
faithfullysiddharth
bakshi
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IELTS letter You have recently returned from an afternoon at your public library, and noticed various negative aspects that could be improved upon. Write a letter to the manager of the public library. In your letter: Describe the poor experience you had Include ideas for what the library should change Explain why you feel the library needs alteration

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