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After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department.Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. In the letter mention: Why do you want to switch departments? Which department would you prefer? Why do you think you are a good fit in that department?

After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. In the letter mention: Why do you want to switch departments? Which department would you prefer? Why do you think you are a good fit in that department? JRyj
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request information about switching the department from the existing to a new one. Over the last three years, I have been working as a social media marketer in your organization. And I must say that the journey has been quite exciting as it gave me a plethora of learning opportunities that have further helped me grow my skills. On the contrary, I believe now the time has come to take the big leap and accept a new challenge. I have always been fascinated by the art of copywriting. The job role sounds exciting as every day is a new challenge and the brainstorming sessions really seem fun. Already having known social media, learning the ropes of copywriting would really help me climb the corporate ladder. On working closely with the copywriting team, I have realized that I do have a knack for writing. There have been many occasions where my writing material has been liked by them. Even a client also applauded one of the things I wrote. I would really appreciate if you could help me in understanding the process of changing the department and the eligibility criteria for it. Given a chance, I won't leave any stone unturned. Yours Sincerely Jason Brown
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request information about switching the department from the existing to a new one.

Over the last three years, I have been working as a social media marketer in your organization. And I
must
say that the journey has been quite exciting as it gave me a plethora of learning opportunities that have
further
helped
me grow my
skills
.
On the contrary
, I believe
now
the time has
come
to take the
big
leap and accept a new challenge.

I have always
been fascinated
by the art of copywriting. The job role sounds exciting as every day is a new challenge and the brainstorming sessions
really
seem fun. Already having known social media, learning the ropes of copywriting would
really
help
me climb the corporate ladder.

On working
closely
with the copywriting team, I have realized that I do have a knack for writing. There have been
many
occasions where my writing material has
been liked
by them. Even a client
also
applauded one of the things I wrote.

I would
really
appreciate if you could
help
me in understanding the process of changing the department and the eligibility criteria for it.
Given
a chance, I won't
leave
any stone unturned.

Yours
Sincerely


Jason Brown
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IELTS letter After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. In the letter mention: Why do you want to switch departments? Which department would you prefer? Why do you think you are a good fit in that department?

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
211 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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