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Write a letter to the Hiring Manager of the company. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what experience and special skills you have Explain why you are interested in the job

Write a letter to the Hiring Manager of the company. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what experience and special skills you have Explain why you are interested in the job 08KG

Dear hiring manager, I'm writing this letter regarding a part time vacancy during upcoming holiday season. I am second year marketing student at tuft college. I think I am a suitable candidate for the job. Let me explain you my situation, With six month internship in marketing from Asian paints I have the suitable experience, Moreover i have good communication skills, I had a good success rate in closing deals. It was a immensely fulfilling experience for me. Even though life is a learning process, Applying my knowledge is my Aim for this position, Other than that it will help me with earning some extra money which will help with paying my expenses. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours faithfully

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part time
 vacancy during upcoming holiday season. I am second year marketing student at tuft college. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I am a suitable candidate for the job.

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Let
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explain
 you my situation, With six month Possible agreement error. The noun 'internship' seems to be countable, so consider using: "internships".internships
internship
 in marketing from Asian paints I have the suitable experience, Moreover
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good
 communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
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good
 success rate in closing deals. It was Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
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immensely
 fulfilling experience for me. Even though
 life is a learning process, Applying my knowledge is my Aim for this position, Other than that it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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some
 extra money which will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 with paying my expenses. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully

IELTS letter Write a letter to the Hiring Manager of the company. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what experience and special skills you have Explain why you are interested in the job

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

126 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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