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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v.3

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v. 3 W9wK
Dear Sir/Madam, I'am writing the letter to inform you that the article which u have published in magazine is unfortunately wrong. The main purpose of writing the letter is that you had wrote some wrong information about my village i. e mainly the drainage system. As the drainage system is v good in village more over the roads also in good condition, roads are far better than as compared to other villages and drainage system is totally the new one which was constructed few months back only. So I suggest you to revoke the article that you have wrote in magazine as soon as possible. Thanking youYours Faithfully John
Dear Sir/Madam, I'
am
writing the letter to inform you that the article which u have published in magazine is unfortunately
wrong
. The main purpose of writing the letter is that you had
wrote
some
wrong
information about my village i. e
mainly
the drainage system. As the drainage system is v
good
in village more over the roads
also
in
good
condition, roads are far better than as compared to other villages and drainage system is
totally
the new one which
was constructed
few months back
only
.
So
I suggest you to revoke the article that you have wrote in magazine as
soon
as possible. Thanking
youYours
Faithfully
John
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. v. 3

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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