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You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: Describe who you are and what your suggestion is Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action

You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: Describe who you are and what your suggestion is Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action 18x7

Dear councilor, I'm writing this letter with regard to improvement of Quinsy park. I'm resident from the apartments near the park. Park need some upgradations first of all it need a walking area encircling the boundary of the park. There should be a dedicated area for kids where they can play. , Moreover some tree plantation should be done to make it more environment friendly. These bare minimum improvements will make this park more resident friendly. Having a dedicated walking track will motivate more residents to stay active and indulge in the healthy lifestyle. kids area will help families to keep their kids more active and not just being all stuck with television, as staying active is very important for kids growth. Tree plantation will help to keep this ecologically supreme and moreover it will help to deal with issue of car pollution in the residential area. I await a favorable response from you. in my opinion all these improvements must be done by summer this year. As it is the tie when kids have off in the school, other than that very one love to be out so it could be a way of outing for the families. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours faithfullyTom

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park
. I'm resident from the apartments near the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
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 to deal with issue of car pollution in the residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
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. I await a favorable response from you. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 my opinion all these improvements This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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 by summer this year. As it is the tie when You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyinfantdaughtersonyouthteenager
kids
 have off in the school, other than that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
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 it could be a way of outing for the families. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.faithfully Tom
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