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You have recently purchased a piece of furniture, but you noticed a problem when it was delivered to you. Write a letter to the store manager and say what is the problem? how did it happen in your opinion? What do you suggest the manager should do to resolve the problem?

You have recently purchased a piece of furniture, but you noticed a problem when it was delivered to you. Write a letter to the store manager and say what is the problem? how did it happen in your opinion? What do you suggest the manager should do to resolve the problem? P3lJ
Dear SirI am Taj Shawon from Sylhet recently I have to visit your shop as well as I bought a piece of furniture but suddenly it has a problem, I am writing this letter to complaint about the furniture. let me explain, I bought a dining table from your shop which is Authentic Indonesian wood with six chair, it has a beautiful design in front of round side, the Table has upgrade futures its rotation system, upper of the table was attached glass But suddenly the glass was badly broken. Actually when you start unloading the dining table that time it It has been broken, after When I open the packaged I found that problem. I cannot except that table within replacement, And I want to received as soon as possible in case you want any question you can call me 0015159211 Hoping for a consideration as soon as possible. yours faithfullyTaj
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from your shop which is Authentic Indonesian wood with six
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, it has a
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design in front of round side, the
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has upgrade futures its rotation system, upper of the
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table
was attached
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suddenly
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unloading the dining
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that time
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been broken
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within replacement, And I want to
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received
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as possible in case you want any question you can call me 0015159211

Hoping for a consideration as
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yours
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faithfullyTaj

IELTS letter You have recently purchased a piece of furniture, but you noticed a problem when it was delivered to you. Write a letter to the store manager and say what is the problem? how did it happen in your opinion? What do you suggest the manager should do to resolve the problem?

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151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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