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You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain the problem -Provide an appropriate solution

You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain the problem -Provide an appropriate solution jpYL
Dear Mr. Patel My name is Rohan Sharma from flat no 15, which is excatly opposite of your apartment. I am writing this letter to draw your attention to immediatly actions to litter in front of my main entrence. Since three day some one from your house is throwing the garbage in my apartment. Moreover, the muggy debris is creating infection as well as sread messy all around the place. This is annoying and unpleasant experience. I suspect that your new maid is causing this trouble. It is headache for us to clean the litter. We are two members in my houSe we both are working job. When we are coming in the evening It is irritating smell and mosquito in messy. Please informe your servant and family members to take care of this issue. Whenever, the garbage collecter does not come, Kindly throw the garbage in common dustbin in outside the apartment. I am waiting for your prompt response. I hope you will not giveme any chance to take this metter to the secretary. Yours Sincerely, Rohan Sharma
Dear Mr. Patel

My name is Rohan Sharma from flat no 15, which is
excatly
opposite of your apartment. I am writing this letter to draw your attention to
immediatly
actions to litter in front of my main
entrence
.

Since
three day
some one
from your
house
is throwing the garbage in my apartment.
Moreover
, the muggy debris is creating infection
as well
as
sread
messy all around the place. This is annoying and unpleasant experience. I suspect that your new maid is causing this trouble. It is headache for us to clean the litter. We are two members in my
houSe
we both are working job. When we are coming in the evening It is irritating smell and mosquito in messy.

Please
informe
your servant and family members to take care of this issue. Whenever, the garbage
collecter
does not
come
, Kindly throw the garbage in common dustbin in outside the apartment.

I am waiting for your prompt response. I hope you will not
giveme
any chance to take this
metter
to the secretary.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Rohan Sharma
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IELTS letter You are facing a problem with your neighbour who is leaving rubbish near your house. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain the problem -Provide an appropriate solution

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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