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You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter: Describe your future wife/husband. What will happen at the wedding? Why do you want to invite him/her?

You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter: Describe your future wife/husband. What will happen at the wedding? Why do you want to invite him/her? Oqed
Dear Susan, I hope you’re well. Guess what? I’m getting married! I’m writing to invite you to come to my wedding and share my happiness. Do you remember Mike, the guy who dragged me out of the water in that terrible drowning accident? Yes, that’s him! We started dating from then. He’s a dentist, and he’s so knowledgeable and humorous that I can’t help falling in love with him. The wedding will be held on May 5. We’ve rented a private garden to have the wedding ceremony. It will be a fun and casual buffet-style wedding. There’s a famous photographer who will take pictures of us. I’m sure we can get some amazing photos. I invited many of our classmates. We haven’t seen each other since we graduated. I miss you so much! Oh, Mike will come too, which I’m sure you’ll be glad to learn about. If you fancy a trip in New Zealand, I can show you around Auckland after the wedding and give you some suggestions about other cities. See you soon, Mia
Dear Susan,

I hope you’re well. Guess what? I’m getting married! I’m writing to invite you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wedding
and share my happiness.

Do you remember Mike, the guy who dragged me out of the water in that terrible drowning accident? Yes, that’s him! We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
dating from then. He’s a dentist, and he’s
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
knowledgeable and humorous that I can’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
falling in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
with him.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wedding
will
be held
on May 5. We’ve rented a private garden to have the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wedding
ceremony. It will be a fun and casual buffet-style
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wedding
. There’s a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
photographer who will take pictures of us. I’m sure we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
amazing photos.

I invited
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
of our classmates. We haven’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
each other since we graduated. I miss you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much! Oh, Mike will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
too, which I’m sure you’ll be glad to learn about. If you fancy
The usual preposition for "a trip" with a named destination is "to". Did you mean "a trip to"?
a trip in
New Zealand, I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
you around Auckland after the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wedding
and give you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
suggestions about other cities.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
,

Mia

IELTS letter You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter: Describe your future wife/husband. What will happen at the wedding? Why do you want to invite him/her?

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  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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