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You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -tell him/her about the gift -tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend -explain why you chose this gift for your friend

You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -tell him/her about the gift -tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend -explain why you chose this gift for your friend xLjg
Dear Michael, I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to tell you that I am sending across a fitness watch as a surprise gift. I knew you had been wanting one for the past two months. This has all the latest features such as step count, calorie burnt. Additionally, it can also be connected to your phone and you can directly answer phone calls via the watch. I will be sending it by courier mail. The package would take about a week to be delivered to your home address. Hopefully, you will receive it by next Saturday. I am also sending the warranty documents of the watch, so you can contact the store for any help you might need with the watch. Being the fitness enthusiast that you are, I chose to gift you the watch so you can use it to keep fit. You could also use it to increase your stamina for the triathlon in April. I know you have been wanting to take a go at it. Take care of yourself and I hope to hear from you soon. Warm regards, Aarunima.
Dear Michael,

I hope this letter finds you in
good
health. I am writing to
tell
you that I am sending across a fitness
watch
as a surprise gift.

I
knew you had been wanting one for the past two months. This has all the latest features such as step count, calorie burnt.
Additionally
, it can
also
be connected
to your phone and you can
directly
answer phone calls via the
watch
.

I will be sending it by courier mail. The package would take about a week to
be delivered
to your home address.
Hopefully
, you will receive it by
next
Saturday. I am
also
sending the warranty documents of the
watch
,
so
you can contact the store for any
help
you might need with the
watch
.

Being the fitness enthusiast that you are, I chose to gift you the
watch
so
you can
use
it to
keep
fit. You could
also
use
it to increase your stamina for the triathlon in April. I know you have been wanting to take a go at it.

Take care of yourself and I hope to hear from you
soon
.

Warm regards,

Aarunima
.
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IELTS letter You have recently purchased a gift item for one of your friends. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -tell him/her about the gift -tell how you want to sent the gift to this friend -explain why you chose this gift for your friend

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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